hmm....where put text? where is the button? how come that sugar glider's head like given ppl chop down? make some feather to ur pet.... make it more real pls.... and background also == who is target audience?
wa..im doin ur work meh Yming??no need to be so mean ok!did i ever harm u??target audience is for those who r interested in gliders. if u r not,den talk less a bit n not offending people!!i noe my design is not that good as U and everyone out there. i got my own way where to put those text n there is where da empty spaces for!n r u blind??the button is there cnt u c??stop fuckin complaining cz i noe WHAT IM DOIN!!!what im expecting here is not getting offended but being given of good advices..n u think ur advice is good??i dun think so..n I DUN EVEN OFFEND UR WORK AT ALL!!i noe all of u are being honest but not in this way ok..i dun care if wat i have said here is wrong or right, but i'll find ways to improve myself on my so called "lousy" design as wat Yming is tryin to say it.
Sweetheart, I think he just voice out what he thinks to help u :)
Honey, u might want to consider putting the buttons closer abit so they don't look too scattered about. I understand its hard to cope with all the assignments we have in our hands now, cool down, k?
And u can probably show a screen to show them where your content will be placed? tis way it'll also make it easy for yourself when u wanna do the real web, no nid to think this n that from the start anymore. Take it easy k babe? =D
Criticism area. Then i had to be aware of the bomb. -may consider on fresher look of green and different green pallete on ur leaves. -may confirm ur style soon as i am confuse whether u are using fully vector or combination with real "rope" graphics.
lizzie~~~ if u think my comment is wrong then i apologize here~~~sorry about comment to ur artwork~~ i won't comment ur artwork anymore~~ don't so childish and playing revenge on my artwork there~~ wat i honest with wat i am saying now....no more comment on your artwork~~ see ya fren~~~
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hmm....where put text? where is the button? how come that sugar glider's head like given ppl chop down? make some feather to ur pet.... make it more real pls.... and background also == who is target audience?
ReplyDeleteeh hamm....i also want to know where to put the text as well....and your 2nd page too much space..
ReplyDeletewa..im doin ur work meh Yming??no need to be so mean ok!did i ever harm u??target audience is for those who r interested in gliders. if u r not,den talk less a bit n not offending people!!i noe my design is not that good as U and everyone out there. i got my own way where to put those text n there is where da empty spaces for!n r u blind??the button is there cnt u c??stop fuckin complaining cz i noe WHAT IM DOIN!!!what im expecting here is not getting offended but being given of good advices..n u think ur advice is good??i dun think so..n I DUN EVEN OFFEND UR WORK AT ALL!!i noe all of u are being honest but not in this way ok..i dun care if wat i have said here is wrong or right, but i'll find ways to improve myself on my so called "lousy" design as wat Yming is tryin to say it.
ReplyDeletei believe it'll look quite good when you put it into flash. everything moving right when you click on it? need some upgrade to the background
ReplyDeleteTake it easy :D jz a comment ok... Peace ^^
ReplyDeleteSweetheart, I think he just voice out what he thinks to help u :)
ReplyDeleteHoney, u might want to consider putting the buttons closer abit so they don't look too scattered about. I understand its hard to cope with all the assignments we have in our hands now, cool down, k?
And u can probably show a screen to show them where your content will be placed? tis way it'll also make it easy for yourself when u wanna do the real web, no nid to think this n that from the start anymore. Take it easy k babe? =D
yea right he is helping me...i DONT NEED ANY of his help. But i'll consider what u have said :) thx gal!
ReplyDeleteCriticism area. Then i had to be aware of the bomb.
ReplyDelete-may consider on fresher look of green and different green pallete on ur leaves.
-may confirm ur style soon as i am confuse whether u are using fully vector or combination with real "rope" graphics.
for me, the 1st gradient bg doesn't look good.
ReplyDeletemaybe can use the 2nd bg, the one with leaves texture instead.
lizzie~~~ if u think my comment is wrong then i apologize here~~~sorry about comment to ur artwork~~ i won't comment ur artwork anymore~~
ReplyDeletedon't so childish and playing revenge on my artwork there~~ wat i honest with wat i am saying now....no more comment on your artwork~~
see ya fren~~~
look whos talking! LMAO~
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